Oh Lord. To say the least, this was BEAUTIFUL. In a strange, sick and twisted way, but beautiful nonetheless. Gosh, I reread it three times and it's just as good. I love the way you write - how you portray their emotions and actions are really realistic!
I can't quote it cos it's too long, but the last six paragraphs are PRICELESS. I swear I stopped breathing to read it. Ahhhhh! This is made of awesomesauce. There should be more fics like this around. Honestly. I love you for this! <3
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Date: 2009-08-04 05:39 am (UTC)I can't quote it cos it's too long, but the last six paragraphs are PRICELESS. I swear I stopped breathing to read it. Ahhhhh! This is made of awesomesauce. There should be more fics like this around. Honestly. I love you for this! <3