http://lastingdreams8.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lastingdreams8.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hoopyfrood 2009-02-02 07:36 am (UTC)

I have no idea where Aiba/Daigo comes from (tell me, please?), but I find it really great;)
What's even better is Sho, tehhe:) Sho is smart, and you're smart, and you write him really well:D
It's so sad and great when we can imagine Aiba in that situation:P
My favorite part was the fact that you described Aiba/Daigo's positions as an after thought, lol! And then Aiba literally changes positions on the spot...like...whoa, haha. And I LOVE that Sho goes "Wait until I'm gone now though!"
Aww-Aiba is so earnest sometimes. OH-and I loved your intro to this, especially the 'putting random things in his mouth' thing. You really illustrated Aiba's childishness there<3

For a second, I was like...what's going on? And then I remembered you mentioning the "Amagasa" verse, and it clicked, lol:)
Once again, you know the sempais like the back of your hand, and I really love this glimpse into them:) Plus, Taichi and Mabo are my favs:P
And the comparison in size is just cute<3

Yasu the friendly ghost! YES! Of course Subaru gets the good hauntings:p
β€œI'm Yasu, I've been haunting you for a while now but I thought I'd introduce myself.”
CUUUTE-gah-Yassu would say that.
AWW-and there was this...emotion...that I felt when reading β€œIt's just, it didn't happen very long ago and I suppose I'm still a bit bitter about the whole thing.”
I don't even know how to describe it, but it was like you really knew Yassu, this character, this ghost who held this bitterness, but was so bubbly...AMAZING ALSKJFLAJF<3
And BWUAUAHAHA-messing with Ryo:)
Please write more of this verse!! :D

I LOVE THE EITO PLUMBING VERSE TOO! :D OMGYES:)
ShigexOhkuraxRyo?? someday:P

I shall be back to read the rest

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