Um-I just have to say that I LOVE 'RAZOR'-it's just so DAMN GOOD-and amazing, and beautiful, and it's really lovely:) I want to quote every line, and I don't know how I'll be able to say my favorite parts, but... I love that it's a razor and not a toothbrush. That makes it less generic:) And then I love how Shige's always dismissed these things, but now understands; it makes it that much more emotional:) And then I love the last image that we see-I can so picture Ryo sprawled on his bed like that:P Oh-and I love that you described Shige's apartment with a splatter each member's stuff, which makes Ryo's stuff less noticeable, but then we come back to the razor-SO AWESOME ^^ <3
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Date: 2008-12-19 06:14 am (UTC)I want to quote every line, and I don't know how I'll be able to say my favorite parts, but...
I love that it's a razor and not a toothbrush. That makes it less generic:)
And then I love how Shige's always dismissed these things, but now understands; it makes it that much more emotional:)
And then I love the last image that we see-I can so picture Ryo sprawled on his bed like that:P
Oh-and I love that you described Shige's apartment with a splatter each member's stuff, which makes Ryo's stuff less noticeable, but then we come back to the razor-SO AWESOME ^^
<3